OMFG I LOVE THIS PLUSH >W< She's just so lovely and graceful I adore the hat and the cloak and I've so happy my dear client ordered them Credit to her as well for asking for the material for the outfit ^^. I think she just looks stunning I'm gonna miss her a lot when it comes time to say goodbye. Also I'm so used to making my 8 inch ponies that I forgot how big the 12 inch ones are xD. Oh and her little smile >w< Just SQUEEEEEEEE >W< ... *ahem* okay I'm done now Now to the details. Shall we? ^^
Commission for Hand sewn by me (ofc) Designed by me (ofc) 100% minky Satin outfit Machine mane and tail details Thread sculpted mouth 12 inches tall removable hat and cloak Stuffed with ultra plush fiber Minky cutie marks Iron-on eyes Branded with my tag ~ AVAILABLE FOR COMMISSION COMMISSIONS ARE OPENED ~
I'd like to start off by saying that the plush looks adorable, and i love the way the mane and tail are shaped. However, there are a few things I'd like to note for improvement.
The head shape is good, however I suggest perhaps enlargening it just a tiny bit, seeing as it would make it more show accurate. I would also give a more pronounced snout or nose.
Now for the body...the front legs are fine. But the back legs need to curve back more, and perhaps you should thin them down a bit. Sinc e there is also a indent and point in the show, to make it more accurate, I would enunciate that a little more.
The mane and tail is very cute and well made, However,the iron on eye is twisted down by a few degrees, so for future plushies, I would straighten them out a bit more.
Overall, you did a very nice job, those are just a few pointers I have for your plushies.
This is my first critique, so here goes. The originality is superb, you have chosen a relatively obscure character and created a plush toy of it well for effect, with everything looking very interesting, especially with the addition of medical gauze to the side of the plush. Vision is very interesting, as the Coolpix s720 used captures the scene well, keeping everything clear and in focus, whilst leaving out the parts that are not important. The technique is brilliant, the sewing is very clear and effective, and it all looks very good, with no frays or other mishaps. Impact works well, especially to someone like me who recognizes the franchise. Very, very well done.
The head shape is good, however I suggest perhaps enlargening it just a tiny bit, seeing as it would make it more show accurate. I would also give a more pronounced snout or nose.
Now for the body...the front legs are fine. But the back legs need to curve back more, and perhaps you should thin them down a bit. Sinc e there is also a indent and point in the show, to make it more accurate, I would enunciate that a little more.
The mane and tail is very cute and well made, However,the iron on eye is twisted down by a few degrees, so for future plushies, I would straighten them out a bit more.
Overall, you did a very nice job, those are just a few pointers I have for your plushies.
Very cute! Keep up the work~
The originality is superb, you have chosen a relatively obscure character and created a plush toy of it well for effect, with everything looking very interesting, especially with the addition of medical gauze to the side of the plush. Vision is very interesting, as the Coolpix s720 used captures the scene well, keeping everything clear and in focus, whilst leaving out the parts that are not important. The technique is brilliant, the sewing is very clear and effective, and it all looks very good, with no frays or other mishaps. Impact works well, especially to someone like me who recognizes the franchise. Very, very well done.
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